2010年1月6日水曜日

---★☆Portfolio for Writing Ⅳ☆★---


Student ID: 08116



Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1A OR 1C
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and the word "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. OVERVIEW

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)



1.0. ESSAYS

(See: Note 3, below.)


Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).


1.1. Showcase
Short titles with links to blog posts
Dates
yyyy.mm.dd

W
C
L
P
M
2-01a (2009.10.07)

Writing class

2009/09/30
3
446
0
5
0
5
2-01b (2009.10.21)

Writing (second link)

2009/10/18
3
492
0
5
0
5

















2-02a (2009.11.04)

Paris Hilton

2009/10/28





2
0
0
2-02b (2009.11.18)
































2-03a (2009.12.02)

Language Learning Stories

2009/12/01
5
725
16
0
0
0
2-03b (2009.12.18/22)

Language Learning Stories(Revised Essay)

2009/12/16
5
823
0
0
0
0
(2-03c)

Language Learning Stories(Myself Revised Essay)

2009/12/15
5
801
0
0
0
0
Totals
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21
3287
16
12
0
10


Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post


1.2. Most Improved Essay

(See: Note 4, below.)


Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements.
  • ...I think that I have to improve my grammar and English words more and more.
  • ...I tried to mention what I would like to say clearly.



2.0. COMMENTS

Showcase
Short titles of posts with links
Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
Thank you!!!
2009.09.16
48words
I answered a question.
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*







2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
advice!!

2009.12.15

64 words

I gave some advice.

2.4. Most comments on:
Short titles of posts with link
Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd
Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*


Language Learning Stories


2009.12.16


823

I talked about what I study various language untill now and from now on.

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2009.12.25

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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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468
I was able to think about it again.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*

Writing class


2009.09.30


446

I showed many people's blog and I could know a lot of things.

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2009.10.3

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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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348
I appreciated a lot of people.










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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.


2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

・....I thought that I would like to stick about my blog.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • ....It is complete to the place where I did not notice by getting the comment.
  • ....I am very glad to feel that my blog is seen and it exists.


3.0. BOOK REVIEWS

3.1. Showcase
Short titles with links
Dates: yyyy.mm.dd
Words
Comments
Example:
2007.05.16
39
1
BR 2-01
2009.10.03
269
1
BR 2-02
2009.10.07
287
0
BR 2-03
2009.10.27
302
2
BR 2-04
2009.11.06
366
0
BR 2-05
2009.11.06
289
0
BR 2-06
2009.11.10
356
0
BR 2-07
2009.11.10
289
1
BR 2-08
2009.11.20
334
0
BR 2-09
2009.12.15
357
0
BR 2-10
2009.12.15
127
0
BR 2-11
2009.12.15
273
0
BR 2-12

BR 2-12: ---☆★Life In The AMAZON JUNGLE★☆---

2010.01.12
273
0
BR 2-13
2010.01.12
389
0
BR 2-14
2010.01.12
294
0
BR 2-15
2010.01.15
82
0
BR 2-16




BR 2-17




BR 2-18














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Totals:
4326
5
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).


3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

　　　　・...My knowledge has increased because I do the book review, too.

・...I was able to touch an English book willingly from it thanks to the book review.

4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA



Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?
√


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
√


4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
√


4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?
√


4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar?
√


4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
√


  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
√


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
√


  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
√


  • "movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)
√


  • "brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")
√


4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
√


  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?

    • __12_ other labels attached to three or more posts

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Labels

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4.3. Links and media
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4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?
√


  • Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?
√


  • How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?

    • __2_ posts including photos or other graphics

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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
√


  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?

    • _2__ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)

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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?


√
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?

    • ___ posts including other media

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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:

    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...



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  • What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference.

    1. ... (short link, date)
    2. ... (short link, date)
    3. ... (short link, date)



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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. ...To make my blog legible, I took care about the color usage and the color of the background.
  2. ...To make sentences that I had written legible, I plainly replaced the subject.
  3. ...To see the entire blog easily, and to make it plainly, I put a lot of photographs on my blog.



5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).
  • ...I was challenging though often had to do the problem under the class and homework and the problem, that was serious for me.
  • ...I was able to touch English almost everyday thanks to the writing class.
  • ... I learned the importance of continuance gradually in every day to what.


6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS

  • ...For myself; I really thought that I must do systematically.
  • ...For peers; I thought that everyone had devised a blog one person one.
  • ...For my successors; I recommend that everyone should do the knack knack of every day and the problem systematically.


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Notes:
  1. This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
  4. The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.
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