Student ID: 08116
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01a (2009.04.08) | My Introduction (Devised Version) | 2009/4/15 | 6 | 514 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-01b (2009.04.20) | My Introduction (Original Version) | 2009/5/21 | 5 | 533 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
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1-02a (2009.06.01) | University Life | 2009/5/27 | 5 | 328 | 5 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-02b (2009.07.06) | University Life(part 2) | 2009/7/6 | 0 | 325 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
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1-03a (2009.06.29) | Movie reviews | 2006/6/16 | 7 | 235 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-03b (2009.07.13) | Movie reviews (Devised Version) | 2007/7/1 | 6 | 430 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Totals | --- | --- | 29 | 2365 | 5 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
I thought ---★☆Shopping Day ☆★--- essay is very good. Because I like sweets and go shopping with my friends when I have free time, so I selected this essay then. I had a nice day!!!2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | I don't remember it. | 2009.04.23 | about 15 words | I thought the post's content was very good. |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | I don't remember it. | 2009.05.09 | about 20 words | I thought that she had a good time in Golden week. |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* |
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| The person said that my dogs are very lovely, so I was glad. | |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* |
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| Everyone advised me, so I selected this post. | |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- |
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 26 | I was glad to comments from everyone. |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | 2009.05.25 | 88 | I like a lot of flowers which are made by my mother. | |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.05.30 | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- |
| I was pleased very much. |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
...Because it doesn't want to be seen so much by me, it doesn't display it.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | ---☆★Reading this book ★☆--- | 2009.04.22 | 342 | 0 |
BR 1-02 | ---☆★"The Rainbow Machine"★☆--- | 2009.05.12 | 257 | 0 |
BR 1-03 | ---☆★"The Lost Key"★☆--- | 2009.05.15 | 348 | 0 |
BR 1-04 | ---★☆"Amelia Bedelia"☆★---(Book review) | 2009.05.20 | 310 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | ---☆★Lost in the Jungle★☆--- | 2009.06.01 | 207 | 0 |
BR 1-06 | ---☆★The New Baby★☆--- | 2009.06.02 | 174 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | ---☆★The Pizza That We Made★☆--- | 2009.06.05 | 302 | 0 |
BR 1-08 | ---☆★A Trip to the Zoo★☆--- | 2009.06.08 | 319 | 0 |
BR 1-09 | ---☆★I Can Swim!!★☆--- | 2009.06.12 | 318 | 0 |
BR 1-10 | ---☆★The Bookstore Ghost★☆--- | 2009.06.21 | 385 | 0 |
BR 1-11 | ---☆★The Ice Cream★☆--- | 2009.07.14 | 129 | 0 |
BR 1-12 | 2009.07.16 | 164 |
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--- | --- | Totals: | 3540 | 0 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
Because the short answer thinks that you cannot neatly read the blog.
I choose the comment of the person who advises even a little.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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---Book review--- (14) ---Essay--- (7) ---Typing--- (14) | --- | --- |
4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
...I tried to think about the shade of the star mark and the blog as everyone saw easily.
...To make the blog that wanted to read for everyone and became it, I contributed a lot of photographs on my blog.
...I made an effort like writing happenings of the day etc, because I had wanted everyone to get to know me abounding even a little.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
...I was able to look back on my own blog thanks to this portfolio.
...It was nice opportunity to use English almost everyday.
...I was able to remember the English word and the idiom, and so on again, thanks to this blog.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
...I thought that I had to contribute a wider content to the blog.
...I should see easily as anyone can see and make the blog of a comprehensible content.
...I thought I was good when many person's more blogs were seen and I commented to a lot of blogs of the person.
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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